ESL Writing: Business letter - request

Dear Name:
A business associate of ours, Berend Kasius of the Hilbers Company in Albany, New York, mentioned your name and showed us
your company's brochure. We own and operate six medium-sized hotels in the Moscow area and are looking for a reliable fire
prevention/sprinkler system for these properties. Could you mail us your latest sales catalogue and price list? Thank you very
much.
Sincerely,
Name

2 comments:

  1. The letter should be addressed to the concerned person and not anyone in general.

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  2. Maddy is right. Either mentioned the First and Last name or simply the last name. Do not address with only the first name.

    I had an associate over at http://www.kirk-f.com who pointed me in the right direction.

    What your write can certainly make a difference.

    Regards,
    Peter

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